मेरी हर धड़कन मे तू
मेरी हर तड़पन मे तू ,मेरी हर याद मे तू
मेरी हर बात मे तू ,
मेरी हर हंसी मे तू
मेरी हर ख़ुशी मे तू ,
मेरे हर ख्याल मे तू
मेरे हर सवाल मे तू ,
बारिश की बूंदों मे तू
सर्दी की धुप मे तू ,
न ये तू जानता है
न मै जानती हूँ की
तू मेरे लिए क्या है ...
रेवा
awesome....at least it is a fantastic try fr first tym....aakhir aap blogging karne hi lagi..
ReplyDeleterewa ji.....
ReplyDeleteis it really written by you........
cant believe....aapke dil mein itna pyaar hai......kabhi aapne dikhaya nahi.....hahahahha......
really nice...wonderful......meaningful.....fantastic......and true to ur heart reflection......
rewa ji...i felt the luv in ur heart....
keep luving...keep in touch......
waiting for new creations.........
wellsurely writtenby heart not head .tahts teh ebst part of her ,she knows what to use and when...........
ReplyDeleteawaiting more of her writings
beautiful poetry u have written
ReplyDeleteit is not known as to whom u have
addressed but it is my imagination
may be for own child to whom we
love, the love which can not be
described
nice one and if it is meant for only
the word "LOVE" then truely this
LOVE can not be defined described
the love is such feeling suddenly
felt
Let such type of poetry be continued
Nice Poem ........ But need to Polish & Tell U Rewa ....... I feel U can write even Better .....
ReplyDeletewow its great congratulation for starting this, all are really verry verry nice and beautyfull keep on writing so we can get more beautyfull poetrys from u....
ReplyDeleteSUPERB ...... MUBARAK HO AAPKO APNI PAHLI KAVITA
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